大作文(图表)
第一段
动态图 What is clearly presented in the above line chart is that dramatic changes have taken place in purpose of mobile reading among students at a certain college from … to … . Based upon the data given above, we can conclude that the proportion of … has gained momentum substantially from A to B, a rise/decline of 50 million, whereas the statistics of … have continued its downward trend slightly/significantly from C to D. In the meanwhile, the … remains steady.
静态图 What is clearly presented in the above table is the statistics of … in a certain city/group. Based upon the data given above, we can conclude that the proportion of … is the highest accounting for 60% among all the four categories. On the contrary, the statistics of … and other factors take up A and B respectively/ for only a small proportion.
补充描述
增长率 at the year-on-year growth rate of 50%
倍数 be twice /three times as high as / the ratio of A to B is 3:2
极值 the figures reached the peak/bottom in …
接近 there is no obvious gap between …/ narrowed over the 25-year period
反超 the … showed an upward trend, overtaking that of … in 1980.
第二段
As a matter of fact, what the author tries to show us is more than statistics. The table leads us to find out what causes the differences. Several primary causes that contribute to the above-mentioned phenomenon could be summarized as follows.
第三段
预测 Taking into account what has been argued, we can come to the conclusion that whatever causes it, this established tendency of the majority of students taking jobs will continue in the forthcoming years unless current conditions go through enormous changes. The government and individuals should collaborate as much as possible to improve people’s standard of living and make the current social system more sociable. Only with joint effort, can these changes be made most use of.
利弊 XXX seems to be a double-edged sword. On the one hand, it enables more people to live a better life, but on the other hand, it is conceivable that its acceleration will put an extra stress on city resources.
Given the gravity of the situation, we should figure out ways to alleviate the problem. It is advisable to launch a public awareness campaign which highlights the dangers of …
When used properly, its benefits far outweigh its disadvantages. We must seek ways to reduce its disadvantages to a minimum so that it better serves humanity.
万能原因
环境背景
经济 On the basis of latest survey by the Chinese academy of science, with the quickening pace of modern life and the fierce competition of society, people’s values have changed gradually, an increasing amount of people aged 40 to 50 chose to … in order to adapt to the rapid development of society. XXX is no longer as essential it used to be.
媒体 The mass media such as radio, television, and the Internet, might have appropriately trumped the benefits of a higher education.
政府 The changes are enhanced and promoted by the superior policy of the government in the infrastructure field. That is to say, it is the enforcement of pertinent laws and regulations that make this surprising trend come into being.
发展 The development of the job market on the whole cannot keep pace with the expansion of college graduates, which has obliged a large number of students to to get better prepared for their careers.
科技 Advancements in science and technology have offered a technical foundation for the rapid development of the Chinese automobile industry by providing a material basis and technical means.
主观意愿
目标 People generally have shifted their life goals from achieving the ultimate success to a relatively easy and comfortable life and therefore are inclined to …
思想 With the social ideology becoming more open and inclusive, the public are more willing to publicize their individuality and have higher demand for ….
进步 It is a well-established fact that people have made extraordinary progress in pursuit of spiritual life. Undoubtedly, they will secure a bright future and better life.
解压 People, who have to juggle academic work, romantic relationships and a busy social calendar, are particularly susceptible to tremendous pressure. By XXX they can successfully manage and reduce stress.
渴望 It is not uncommon to find that aspire to enhance their overall competitiveness. Therefore, XXX can gain great popularity among them. This development is believed to be in the interest of both individuals and society as a whole.
带来的好处
关系 In a bid to develop interpersonal relationship and enjoy comfortable life, people in mounting numbers prefer service and environment to other factors.
学识 XXX increases one’s knowledge, widens one’s horizons and enhances mutual understanding. /Through XXX, we Chinese have expanded our scope of knowledge, and we have come to know the world better and have been learning how to develop our country better.
能力 XXX can boost people’s development of interpersonal relationships. Awareness of cooperation, dependability, responsibility and punctuality are cultivated and fostered as people …
负面现象
意识 General public lacks the basic awareness about the significance/danger of ……
法规 Laws may not have been strictly enforced to warn people not to do.
利益 Driven by short-term profits, XXX, as a result, leading to our ecology in grave danger.
小作文(应用)
邀请信
On behalf of the Student Union, I am writing this letter to cordially invite you to attend the … located at (place) on (date)
1 | You are sincerely invited to participate in this important event as our judge/keynote speaker/distinguished guest. As you are one of the outstanding experts in ... all over the world, I believe the students will not only be able to learn from you, but to be inspired by you as well. |
We will surely look forward to your gracious presence that day. If you have any concerns regarding this, please do not hesitate to contact us.
推荐信
介绍人
I am pleased to recommend XXX for the position of …
1 | XXX is one of the most pleasant persons you'll ever meet or work with./ The characteristic that is most commendable in XXX is... |
For all of these reasons, I think XXX will make a fine addition to your team/program.
介绍物
In reply to your request for recommending sth of quality, I am privileged to introduce…
1 | Firstly, XXX won applause from people with a discerning eye, ever since it was publicly discussed on social media. |
I give it my highest recommendation without reservation. I hope that you will have… and I would be pleased to answer any additional questions you may have.
建议信
个人 As one of your closest friends, it is my pleasure to put forward some suggestions with regard to…
1 | First of all, you should always retain a flexible mind when you are receiving advice and insight from those who have rich experience. Besides, you should take active steps to deal with your problem, since everything will become meaningless if you sit back and wait for solutions. |
I hope you will find the above-mentioned useful. I am looking forward to witness a favorable improvement as soon as possible.
机构 As a resident who has been living in this city, I am writing this letter to provide some suggestions that I think are useful to improve the quality /service.
1 | Recently, xxx can be characterized by the ... However, compared with before, xxx. |
Hope you take these suggestions positively and improve your services as soon as possible.
倡议信
As most of you know, …./ These days, the Students’ Union is doing sth. and this open letter is for the purpose of advocating all the students on campus to …
1 | Compared with the past years, we enjoy a higher quailty of life but ... This phenomenon is particularly worth concerning and it is advisable for us to reverse this trend. Thus, everyone is supposed to take actions to ..., such as doing sth. |
As students of this university, we need to show our … to … by donating money to assit in a speedy recovery. Please consider our suggestions and we are looking forward to your actions and participation!
申请信
① From the… website I learned about your need for a… I am very interested in this position, and
believe that my education and employment background are appropriate for the position.
② As a college student about to graduate, I am writing to apply for the … position in your company/admission to your university majoring in …
③ Moved by the noble cause of xxx Project and encouraged by what has been achieved so far, I would like to contribute my bit to the project by offering …
1 | The key strengths that I possess for success in this position include ... |
Thank you for taking time from your busy schedule to read this letter, and I will appreciate it if …, I am looking forward to your favorable reply.
道歉信
① Please accept this letter as my formal apology for what happened on(location/event/issue.)It was not my intention to cause any damage or inconvenience. In retrospect, I believe the situation resulted from…
② I would like to thank you for arranging to meet with me. Unfortunately, I have recently been diagnosed with a serious ear infection which will require surgery on the same day as our interview. I am so sorry to say thar I will therefore not be able to …
1 | Do you mind if I postpone ... to another day later in the week? |
I sincerely thank you for hearing me out. Again, I apologize for any inconvenience this may cause you.
祝贺信
I am very happy today to hear the news that… Hereby I am writing this letter to you to congratulate you on this achievement.
1 | This only could be achieved by your painstaking efforts and talent. You really deserve... |
Many congratulations on your achievement and best wishes for future growth as well.
感谢信
① On behalf of.., I express heartfelt thanks for all you do.
② I am writing to express my gratitude for your time and consideration in your endeavors. Your perspective and encouragement mean a great deal to me.
1 | We appreciate your unfailing attention to detail and several participants commented on how well the event was organized. |
If I can be of any service to you in the future, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
投诉信
I’m writing to file a complaint about the service I received during my November 15 visit to your store. I am disappointed because——
① It did not function the way it was supposed to and therefore, resulted in a great deal of interruptions to my life. Besides, I have been trying to negotiate with one of your staff members, but no agreement has been reached because of his indifference.
② The service was not performed correctly /I was billed the wrong amount /something was not disclosed clearly or was misrepresented.
③ It was the frequent breakdowns and problems that led me to make inadequate preparation for GRE.
④ It was the guide’s rude attitude that caused us to enjoy no comfort in the trip.
1 | To resolve the problem, I would appreciate your money refunded/ charge card credit/ repair/ exchange. |
I believe you will take this matter into serious consideration and give a satisfactory reply as soon as possible. At the same time, I sincerely hope that you will review … If detailed information is required, please contact me at the above address or by phone at 111.
通知/告示
① Your attention, please… It is announced that… / Owing to… we beg to inform you that…
A and B will be invited to be the guests of honor.
② All individuals are hereby informed that legislation regarding… has been approved.
1 | 参与活动 |
If you are interested in this activity, please feel free to contact us via xxx@163.com. The deadline is…
Come and join us now!